Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving
Discuss the arguments for and again keeping pets
To what extent do you agree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowlege or experience
Nowadays, pets are being important part of our lives. there various kind of pets like dogs, cats, birds, fish and even toxic animals like snakes and people spent too much on keeping and maintaining them while some part of the world, humans are still suffering from poverty. In my opinion, this trend is unwarranted. there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most prominent one is that, as it is claimed this move negatively could be so destructive which limits and tears down kindness to animals, social equality and also tend to escalate posh and popular culture, as it does it also stapes away the social justice.
Moreover, factual evidence of enhancement of poverty and starvation could be witnessed with the guarantee of this move. also this harmony and luxury will apply only for few pets in the world. As an example, the pet dog of Julia Roberts get more facilities and food than an average person in us. The same treatments will not applicable for normal pet in the same country.
Furthermore, most of us have sense that spending money on pets will not uplift the people who are still suffering from poverty, marginalization and starvation to rise above their genes under crushing circumstances. even the poor individuals are also tend to love animals but when they realize some fraction of the society care and paid for pets than poor humans, there will be paradoxical effects in the society.
To sum up, in the view of the arguments out lined above, I can conclude that despite some drawbacks of this trend which cannot be ignored. As humans we should love animals and keep pets but not in extreme way while people are still suffering from poverty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78006872852 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49754665229 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1663281743 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118042240831 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395743817513 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463836789185 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700282063796 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192194119461 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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