Lot is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, sport, music and others are not. however, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be thought to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both those views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer knowledge or experience.
according to some fraction of the society its is argued that human are both with certain talents and others have a contradictory view point that they not. As the view of the former fraction, I belive that is a warranted apprehension and there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. For an instance if you read life stories of famous scientists, actors, singers, sport person who were extremely talented, you will notice that they were born with the particular set of talents. those talents pave the way to realise about gaps and limitation to be a talented person.
Moreover, factual evidence of enhancement of born talents can be polish from the offspring stage. For an example the greatest Albert Einstein was not showed off his mathematical talents in his younger age but his mother found his special abilities and brushed up his skills to rise above his genes. that may hold far reaching application and implication beyond all current expectations by multi-deciplinary values.
Furthermore, most of us have sense that child can be thought to become a good talented person from the early ages. As an example if you need to highlight your sun in soccer, then from the early ages you should practise and focus him for that target which influence the young individual to become focused, purpose driven and lit up from the inside.
To sum up, according to the arguments outlined above, I can conclude that people are born with talents but parents should understand them and help them to brush up their skills and be a better servant of the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83582089552 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65862333039 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4040484171 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.6 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22400822803 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821789093782 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585963279981 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118994778466 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628928134986 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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