Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What’s your opinion?
People think about the best measure for intelligence, some people think about success and other think about other ways. Smart is not the only way to measure intelligence as there are several types for intelligence as (naturalist, musical, intra-personal and logical mathematical). People need to understand the types of intelligence as for naturalist this ability classify elements of the environment, objects, animals or plants. Also, for musical this ability produces musical skills such as rhythm.
Intelligence involves mental abilities such as problem solving. People need to use what they have learned to come up with solutions to problems. More recently, scientist unsatisfied with the traditional idea of a single intelligence have granted alternate theories of multiple intelligences. It seems that the human understanding of intelligence is somewhat limited when we focus on traditional or academic type intelligence.
In summary, the culture fair test has shown limited success, and we are no closer than we were a generation ago to having a performance measure of intelligence that is both within cultural reliable and valid. During the 20th century, test developers used factor analysis to identify reasoning and crystallized skills as the core constructs of intelligence.
In conclusion, there are better ways to measure intelligence. I believe intelligence is best showcased through various means beyond achievement and success. Also, we should always bring change and increase our intelligence level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as for, in conclusion, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69603524229 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20302792955 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9149258232 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385864598794 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115705230983 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10891643291 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203415770495 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13496959037 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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