Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What’s your opinion
Thesedays Some people are thinking about the best measure of intelligent. Is it about success? For example, IF you are a successful person you must be clever. Or there are other ways to measure that? This essay agrees with the second opinion that there is a multiple way to measure it. The essay will first talk about how to be successful and if it is specially for intelligent or not and then discuss about why intelligent can’t be measured by success only.
When we talk about success it isn’t about intelligent only. it could achieve by hard work and discipline. To illustrate success, you can be the most successful person by physical activities such as boxing or any other sport, not only sports but also acting, singing or even dancing. So we can’t normalize success for just one focal point.
Secondly, why intelligent can’t be measured by success only? In fact, there a lot of intelligent people who didn’t success. You can’t just say I will be a successful person because of my intelligent. Its need to be also a hard worker and improving yourself. For example, my friend who is the cleverest one I have ever met can’t even find a job. Because he Satisfy of being a clever person and forget to work in himself to improve his ideas and to create a chance to be successful person
Overall, if you see that intelligent measured by success or by hardworking. The most part is trying to combine all of this points to create a successful person and it’s my opinion at this part of essay.
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...reate a chance to be successful person Overall, if you see that intelligent mea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69288389513 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64081331995 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505617977528 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1853194095 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7058823529 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410530813684 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149651101174 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113962317689 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255486124894 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128225922117 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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