Teachers are very important in bringing up every students life. These days, it has became a growing trend to see people arguing that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to behave well, to judge what is right and what is wrong, while others think that they should only teach students academic subjects. The following paragraphs will discuss the both views of this argument.
On the one hand, people believe that teachers should help their students in deciding what is wrong and what is right, how to act to the situations, and how to be successful and polite. There are a myriad of benefits and morals values from it which everyone can gain. For example, students who became successful in life, who has been taught this morale's by teachers will be a huge role mode for others. They will bring both glory and respect to them and their teacher and the institution.
On the other hand some, some people believe that teachers should be only responsible for teaching academics to the students. In this case, students will get more time to learn things, but they will lack morale's. Those who get proper attention from their home have a chance of becoming great, but those who lack a good homely environment, will be out of balance in their life.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude the importance of teachers who help their students understand what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. In my opinion, this system is indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...are very important in bringing up every students life. These days, it has became a growi...
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Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...every students life. These days, it has became a growing trend to see people arguing t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...o be successful and polite. There are a myriad of benefits and morals values from it w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78378378378 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35968939628 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53667953668 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.055768208 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430028771116 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149915095765 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146741168246 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267938098396 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116131804976 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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