It is a controversial matter that the amount of noise people make should be restricted strictly. People may make noise subconsciously or consciously the whole time, and this certainly affects other people in some circumstances. This is not an easy issue though, because both sides can be reasonable or not in the light of different situations.
On the one hand, noise is an unavoidable thing in daily life. People have to make noise when doing normal things. For instance, noise emerges when people are eating and drinking. Besides, the environment with some relaxing and comfortable noise can help people concentrate on their work instead. In my experience, some so-called “white noise” from the outside can help me fall asleep.
On the other hand, uncontrolled noise can affect human well-being in a complex way. Firstly, it brings people metal problem. Noise annoys people once it increases to a certain extent. There is a common consensus that people living in over noisy environment will easily get annoyed thereby getting distracted and mental fatigue. Another viewpoint is that people have to be confronted with the threat to their physical health caused by noise. That is to say that the sight and hearing will probably be impaired if someone gets continuously exposing to noise above certain decibels.
I tend to believe that the amount of noise people make needs to be controlled to a certain degree. To be more specific, it seems to me that if noise emerged as an appropriate form such as white noise, it is beneficial to people instead. For the loud noise such as some from vehicles and constructions, they should be guided both temporally and spatially, bringing no harms to surrounding people and communities.
- Some people think it is more important to plant more tree in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 73
- Task 2: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 67
- Some people think that they can make as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled. Discuss both views and include your own opinion and examples. 71
- Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor bike To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a complex way" with adverb for "complex"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, for instance, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12280701754 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85279341808 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4178936208 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8823529412 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388877249711 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139175436984 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764466523151 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2611161799 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056960415775 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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