The advancement in economy and technology simultaneously with the increasing demand for many essential products and drugs to satisfy all human needs have cost a tremendous amount of animal's lives. Even sacrificing their lives is essential for the future of science, it is still a cruel action when we think of it. In this essay, I will look at some of the merits and demerits of this ongoing animal exploitation.
Let us begin by looking at the advantages this can bring to our lives. First of all, being able to successfully deliver a type of drugs or daily products into the commercial market is not easy, as people can only the tip of the iceberg. Obviously, scientists have to conduct hundreds of experiments in which killing animals are likely to be involved. For example, the shampoo brand or the soap bar we are using probably has been tested on monkeys before they come into our hands to ensure safety for end-users. Furthermore, the genes in some kind of animals are completely different from human's. In some cases of a certain type of cockroaches, their genes are continually reviving to create a new body part when there is a missing limb. This incredible scientific finding can aid scientists to come up with an astonishing method to heal people in further future.
On the other hand, animals are being exploited every day to serve our purposes. The significance of protecting animals from poachers and preserving their habitats is necessary because they are part of the nature that keeps us alive. Domestic animals such as dogs and cats are extremely loyal to us, and some animals even play an important role in our lives.
In conclusion, while everybody agrees that exploiting animals is a sign of cruelty, using animals for experimentation is necessary for the development of science to some extent. Personally, I think that the goverment should be able to balance between restricting freely animals killing and using animals for reseaching.
- Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others. Some people therefore think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society; those who choose to study less relevant subjects sho 89
- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? 84
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Nowadays, young people admire sports stars though they often do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 84
- Companies spend millions each year advertising online, in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can often encourage people to want and buy things that they do not need. What are the positive and negative effects of consumerism? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, so, still, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97568389058 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8213171354 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7909982475 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286051648154 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860960225531 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749150159171 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177977604526 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884082767035 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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