Some people think we need to give aid to all poor countries other, however, argue that we should not give international aid to country with corruption in their system .Discuss both the view and provide your opinion?
Helps to other is a help to god.Helping others in their critical situation gets lots of blessings. Many individuals we require to provide help to every impoverished nations.on the other hand folks argue by not giving global support to region with corruption in their system. In this eassy I will critique both the aspects before forming my opinion with pertinent illustrations.
Developing countries mostly requires the international financial or in other form of aid.There are myriad of countries who always opt to help anytime during uncircumstance occurs in backward regions.For instance, when Pakistan refused to import crude oil to India and there was scarcity of crude oil in India at that moment Iran aid India and import crude oil. Moreover, Germany was awarded humanitarian noble from united nation in 2008 for giving donations in tsunami occurrence. Overall, there is always need of someone who can help them in their difficult time.
Corruption is rampant increasing in developing countries and that is tge reasons of their backwardness.Richer person are getting much richer by giving and accepting bribe.Helping countries should stop giving aid to corrupted nation as they misuse all the buck's. Instead of using in social and infrastructure amenities they use for their personal benefits. For example, recently Pakistan was facing the problem of finance and United Nation refuse to give aid.hence,those country should not be given aid which is having high corruption ratio.
I reckon that instead of giving financial help,a country should start up multinational companies in poor country by which public get employment and chances of corruption can declined.
To conclude, I recapitulate although giving international helps is fruitful things,it is jeopardy in corrupted country for the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i reckon, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54642857143 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05249772268 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603571428571 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5779741453 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.181818182 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364780297701 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128861848074 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814302005193 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19174774443 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483765736275 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.