Some people think that when the criminals are punished and they will not continue to commit crimes. However, some people have repeatedly committed crimes. What do you think is the reason? What should be done to stop these people from continuing to commit crimes.
It is true that a part of a criminal in the world after being released from prison again continues to commit crimes. From my perspective, this problem results from many causes, which calls for appropriate measures to be taken.
There are several factors leading to people commit the crime again. The main cause behind this issue is that penalties for crimes are too light and short-term. Because these penalties are not strong enough to deter criminals. For instance, some kind of crimes such as burglary and shoplifting are detained for only a few weeks or some mild instruction and then released. This lead to a slight discrediting of the penalties. As a result, they will do more bad things and become a criminal again.
Some solutions can be taken to solve these issues. One possible approach could be for the government to provide long-term punishment to such criminal groups. Besides that, the government can run some extra class to teach criminal how to be a good person and do some useful things for the society. Moreover, the government should create more jobs for the criminal who have released and encourage some companies to allow these people to do in their company. This action not only helps company recruit more workers with low salary but also decrease the crimes rate.
In conclusion, I believe with some measures I have mentioned above, the crimes rate will decrease and there is a sharp increase in the percentage of employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or crimes are too light and short-term. Because these penalties are not strong enough t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93495934959 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55535581617 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593495934959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6244035962 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259563233514 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857229588223 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715359122163 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143194882521 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444233198655 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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