Some people think that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaning less. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
On the one hand, i am in favour of the idea that having a particular career plays an important role in people’s lives. The first explanation is that having a job is synonymous with having a stable income, which undeniably helps enhance the quality of people’s lives. For instance, there would be no worry about daily meals, instead, people tend to be in search of seeking things owning higher quality due to their income. Additionally, with basic salary, people could not only taking care of themselves, but also having an ability to look after their beloved ones and even others, who need help immensely. Therefore, their live would become meaningful to some extent since they can bring happiness to others.
On the other hand, i concede that jobless is not as same as meaningless for several reasons. Firstly, happiness would not only measured by the success of career, it depends on a number of factors. Truly, unemployed people still have their beloved ones namely their family, friends, who are always support them and need them, therefore, they are not living solely or uselessly. Secondly, to become one of attributed factors in community, unsuccessful people could have manifold ways. Specifically, in lieu of monetary value, those can joint their hand by their own physical ability such as taking part in unprofitable organizations or charity groups.
In conclusion, i side with the perspective that having a job is necessary on account of its merits, however, people’s lives would be still valuable with the lack of success or career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78115124474 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7015611624 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134139873027 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565090665571 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340742189889 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956878296096 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228816831298 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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