Some people think young people should be free to choose their jobs. But other people think they should be realistic and think more about the future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People are divided on the issue of choosing the jobs. Some people argue that it is appropriate for the young generation to choose the jobs they like while other groups of people argue that it should be realistic and futuristic. This essay intend to analyze both viewpoints, i personally side with the latter viewpoint.
Job is the most necessary thing for the people to lead their lives and contribute to the national economy. Different types of work are more demandable in different decades. The availability of jobs in a particular area attracts people to study in this area. Although people have right to choose their dream jobs, it should be realistic and futuristic. The job that has some demand now, more likely to be ruined in the near future, provides less financial and job security. To cite an example, in the fourth industrial revolution, many jobs like content writer, web developer and image editor will be diminished due to artificial intelligence. So, it is less likely a good decision to choose these jobs as a career. The manual type writer job has vanished already. So what will be now for the staff who were engaged with this job? Only realistic jobs which has the bright future can provide the skill security. Moreover, Choosing these jobs will make more demandable in future job market.
However, everyone has the different goal and an assiduous person can impossible to possible. Choosing job that has a bright future but is not suitable for him, can less likely make him more successful in this sector. No one can thrive without personal attraction in this area, can make it more stressful and unhappy.
In conclusion, everyone has the different interesting area and he should choose the best demandable and futuristic jobs in this area. Attraction never lasting for a long time if it don't come any economic benefit. So, it is very essential to balance the personal comfort zone and the demandable zone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92048929664 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61001605081 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1716746638 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.45 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282612869217 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907140215316 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914292962896 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172946588007 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12504820992 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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