Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think that they should be encouraged to work as car mechanic or builder, etc to serve society. Discuss both opinion and give your own opinion.
These days, society is developing more and more so many universities, schools and careers is mushrooming. The young has many choices to decide their future. It is general that young people should go to university to improve their education. However, other people believe that they should be encouraged to go to work as car mechanic, builder and so on to serve society. In my opinion, I think that the young should go to university to have bright future and following this essay will discuss in detail.
On a hand, the twenty-first century is the century of knowledge and it is no denying the fact that further education could provide the young for more opportunities. As long as more certificates young people have, more chance they will do their favourite work which they have been interested in since they were little. For example, if they want to become a to doctor, they must have certificate about health or study medical. In spite of the fact that they could have wide and deep knowledge about medical, they do not study formally at university or have some certificates about it, they do not become nurse or doctor in any hospital.
On other hand, there are not a small number of students who do not like studying and only want to earn money when they graduate from high school fit completely to go to work as junior worker. Despite the fact that further their education will bring their good future, we can not turn down that the young who go to work when they are student has better independent. Early working means that they can have more experience and earn a salary to pay for their living cost and instead of spending much time and money studying, they can accumulate much experience for their career.
In conclusion, studying brings brighter future for young citizens and with the good certificate, they can do their favourite job although early working can help them have income and experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'certificated'.
Suggestion: certificated
...t to become a to doctor, they must have certificate about health or study medical. In spite...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ospital. On other hand, there are not a small number of students who do not like studying and o...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n help them have income and experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78247734139 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5311740064 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507552870091 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.221505674 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304066508157 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127605874505 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110986317464 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188479425624 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141742412223 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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