It is undoubted that Zoos are one of the favourite places for families to spend their leisure time while some people think that zoos play a dispensable role and it to be closed. Others think that Zoos are helpful in order to protect the endangered species. Now, this essay will discuss both views in upcoming paragraphs
On the one hand, firstly, Zoos are cruel because they take the animals away from their natural habitats which is not safe for anyone. Moreover, living in zoos, animals may have lost their rights and freedom as well as they can be dependent on caretakers. Moreover, there is, for instance, Limited amount of food supply in a zoo while, those animals enjoy surplus amounts in their habitats, as a result, their body may suffer from weakness and other diseases in which they can lost their talent of hunting and undergo huge stress.
On the other hand, zoos have made great improvements over years, It can aid to preserve the endangered species. For example, looking at the present scenario, due to deforestation, zoos are the most effective way to preserve to prevent rare animals. Apart from this, Zoos are beneficial for the education because it gives opportunity to students for knowing the behaviour and anatomy after doing research on them. Along with this, zoos protect those animals from illegal Hunters and dangerous conditions.
To conclude, after analysing both aspects of the argument it seems that zoos play a key role in protecting animals with security as well as for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as they can be dependent on caretakers. Moreover, there is, for instance, Limited amount...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...ss and other diseases in which they can lost their talent of hunting and undergo hug...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doing research on them. Along with this, zoos protect those animals from illegal ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt it seems that zoos play a key role in protecting animals with security as well...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...le in protecting animals with security as well as for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9568627451 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46140840457 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8307395536 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319054563145 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126809784087 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716005633214 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196623990233 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10277042688 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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