Some people want their country to host international sports events . While others , believe it brings more problems than benefits.
Discuss and give your opinion.
Few people believe that hosting an international sporting event is a great chance for their country to receive economic , social and cultural benefits. However , others have obside views. But according to me , it will be better for the future of a country when they host international sporting events.
To commence with , the availability of international sports events are lucrative for youngsters to uplift the standard of their life. First and foremost , hosting a major sporting event can be excellent way to grow the profile of the country in the nation . Moreover , the opportunity of host international sports show the country states such as , know about the country cultural or tourist attractions which is benefits for country economic. Apart from that , sports person can show their states with the help of international games for example , if they won the match and get the prize then they show their states of country.
On the other hand , when sports person go to other country for playing any games then firstly country provide the facilities for sports person. For example, investment on playing ground as well as invest in new infrastructure and clean environment as well uplifit the standard of transportation the needs of the ashletes or sports people . Therefore it is better for rich countries hosting this events rather than developing countries where they should spend money on important issues such as, health, education or housing.
In conclusion, rich country should be provided hosting events rather than poor country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26829268293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80908028282 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4852238142 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.818181818 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298858156582 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132785138544 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648513531965 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204153065153 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562927366397 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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