Some people work for the sum Organisation all their working life other think that it is a better to work for different organisation. discuss both views and give your opinion?
In this Era, population has been being bombed by leaps and bounds , owing to that, people can not get the job ,which type of job they want .some individuals reckon that, it is a beneficial work only one Corporation to become employed their working life, however, other against that and say work for different concern .I will discuss both view and give my opinion.
On one hand, everyones want High professional job to fulfill their need and dreams. Many employed work for company all their life, because there are some merits of lifetime job in same company. First and foremost, if they get much money, where they are working also they can fulfill their dreams and needs because of that, they are working in a same company until from retirement. Moreover, life time job in same company benignant for them, after working same years in company they not only get trust of chairman but also get promotion . For epitome of this, in many countries people want work in fortune 500 companies in the world : Google, Facebook, Microsoft and Reliance because they want Zenith of success through their job. They would happy , their life spend for biggest and well known company. These are company give their employed - much salary, luxurious car ,Bungalows and better education provide their children.
On the other hand, many individuals change concern frequenly better for them, because they are not satisfied through their job. Some men kinds reckon that, it is good options working for dissimilar concern, if peole work in different company in their life the get cognition about different product of different country. Many people want to work in number of different company for improve their knowledg also larn strategy and modus operandi of different concern. For an example, in India, many employed migrate to different country for working of well known company and know about modus operandi of famous company it would be helpful for them in future they can start their own business.
In my opinion, people should working in same Corporation because they can chance to get promotion as well as increase their salary, owing to high salary, they can fulfill their dreams.
To conclude individuals work for one and the same company for lifetime because there are some merits in working same company also employed feel relax, however if people change company frequently they could not set their goals and become hard to set there carrier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07506053269 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3246646728 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452784503632 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.5724239806 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.714285714 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429541286044 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182713550784 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115683802485 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311940004881 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157970987609 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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