In some societies, more and more people deciding to live alone. Why do you think this is? What are the disadvantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, a lot of people are managing to live alone in some societies, while it has a positive and negative impacts on people's behaviour. But I would consider the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
These days,we can see some people who have been living lonely for ages and already adapted to be independent in their life. Firstly, people who want to live alone, they would like to be unrestricted and create their world in that way in which they want, for example, when you are going somewhere, you will have nobody to ask permission or doing some crazy activities who does not suffer from your behaviour. This is a main features for human who live b themselves solitary.
But there are a number of drawbacks which influence dreadfully on humans' behaviour. First of all, people who determine to live by themselves, they will exactly face with life obstacles such as get by oneself salary, finding work, paying for tax and rent. When the person is isolated form society he or she might feel stress with life challenges, at this moment human kind needs some support to overcome hurdles and cope with it together. On the other hand, surviving to live on themselves wage is too demanding to get by for it, for instance, charges for gas or electricity, rent for accommodation and also food supply.
In general, as there have been mentioned causes and effects above, it is not straightforward to be independent by oneself in our life. It seems to me that it depends on personal preference what to chose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in general, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79615384615 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72284603541 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7812636029 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.363636364 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155795560885 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565733625791 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527704580075 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094202910547 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543069685257 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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