Some sports are extremely dangerous for those who play them. Why do people participate in such sports? What measures could they take to minimise the risks involved?
Sports are an essential part of life and almost every country supports their players to achieve the highest ranks and medals in events such as Olympics. However, some sports such as wrestling and car racing involve high risks and sometimes might even lead to the death of the player/participant. Despite the levels of danger involved, players actively participate in such sports. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this and some measures to prevent such mishaps.
One of the prominent reasons, people participate in a particular sport is their passion for that game. For instance, some people are crazy about speed and love to participate in car racing events. Another reason could be parental pressure. In many countries such as Japan and China, parents want their children to excel in sports like boxing or wrestling and martial arts. Hence, children eventually develop interest and they grow up into talented boxers or wrestlers who are able to secure a gold medal for their country. Sometimes, people also participate in dangerous sports just for the sake of making money as people get heavily paid when they engage themselves in something which has high danger levels.
Nevertheless, there is a way to reduce the accidents associated with these sports. For example, thorough checks should be done before the car racing events to check for any technical issues with the car. Also, the drivers should be secured with high-quality helmets in order to prevent chances of severe injuries. In addition to this, instant medical aids should be present at the venue to avoid delays in the treatment of injured drivers. Moreover, for sports like boxing, there should be strict rules against hitting the opponent player beyond limits and the wrestlers should be made to wear knee caps and other protective gears.
In conclusion, although some sports are risky, people continue to participate in such games. They do this in order to earn money or because of their passion for that sport. However, safety measures such as wearing protective gears and security checks can be used to minimise the risk levels associated with such sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12857142857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53765278016 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574285714286 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9433056605 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326177054491 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101907858671 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719446089258 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213233521099 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102914441967 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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