In recent times, the majority of people especially children have an interest in play video games rather than outdoor activities. However, some people believe that outside activities are more crucial for kids instead of playing video games. I am totally agreed with this statement and in this essay, I will give the appropriate reasons in further paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays the trends of playing computerized games are rapidly rising among children. The outdoor activities bring a number of benefits. One of the major benefits is that if young people perform outdoor activities such as outdoor sports so it helps to enhance their physical as well as mental strength. For instance, a child who participates in sports and other outdoor activities, so they have a better physical and mental ability rather than those kids who play digital games. Another benefit is that, if children are taking a part in these activities they can build new relationships in society and it also develops their interpersonal skills.
Apart from this, although video games are better options for only entertainment purposes, they have harmful effects on child health. If a kid spends a lot of time playing video games it directly generates a harmful impact on the eye side as well as on the human brain. Take the recent report of the World Health Organization (WHO) as an example, research report of WHO claim that 65% of eye and brain issues are faced by those children who play video games rather than those who are participating in outdoor activities.
To conclude, If children take a part in outdoor activities so they can be developed new skills as well as make new relations in society. Secondly, those children also have faceless health issues in comparison who are playing video games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04391891892 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66039307044 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6097415111 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243602678744 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991039292193 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706791179653 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163835553782 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05855753211 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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