Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think media is better . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Although it is believed that, newspapers are the best way to get updated on news , others opine that other media platforms are very beneficial. I stand with the latter view as this has more benefit .
On the one hand , there are two main reason why some people reckon that magazines are convenient . Firstly , people develop habits to read newspapers and read it on daily basis. On the other words , in school , teacher forces students to read newspapers therefore they has been started reading newspapers on their daily life . Secondly, news papers are very cheap compares with mobile phone and computers and individual can easily afford it . Additionally it is also available free of cost at cafe , restaurant as well as railway stations.
On the other hand , others argue that gadgets are excellent way to know about current affairs. To elaborate , social media platform are very fast and people get news within a second moreover it is easy to carry mobile phones with you and apart from that people also enjoy real time video footage with very good sound quality and understand easily as compared to reading newspapers.
I believe that , newspapers are outdated in Morden era and peoples preferred to use mobile phones for their day to day activities .
In recapitulation, despite of gadgets, newspapers are cheap as dirt and also grey people had habits to read it on their routine in the morning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98290598291 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57103806517 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598290598291 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8443337082 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178392265933 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679910616789 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055817731318 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982512487561 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408829819356 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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