Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a psitive or negative development?

The technology drive the world. Human rely on technology their are surrounded computer bound the folks. Several person online course learn on online website and technologies very useful in ours life but each coin have two sides. In this essay I will discuss pros and cons growth.

Lot of University apply on online and offline course available but their are more data analysis on online website is very useful because students very enthusiastic to learn and whenever free time or more knowledge get them in online course.student miss classis or other reason then University get upload online lecture then student miss lecture they read out and see them. There are lot of traffic issue solved and save the time. Some financial trouble parents can not effort taught in your own students so online course available their easily learn. Online course is unlimited power of knowledge. Online website easily explained and directly cage them knowledge because of easier method taught. There are several more attractive intelligent vedio or sample procedure to give some tip easily remember that.

On the other hand there are few flaws in this concept. Online course is also benefits but online attractive games, social media, chit chat their lead to students forget about goal and going on wrong way direction. The online course very briefly explain and more misselious question is uplift.

To summarise, online activities is also beneficial for students but they going on wrong way because of entertainment, movie other so on.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'drives'.
Suggestion: drives
The technology drive the world. Human rely on technology the...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ive the world. Human rely on technology their are surrounded computer bound the folks...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...online and offline course available but their are more data analysis on online websit...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, so, then, thus, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19028340081 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44786983809 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 82.1693435559 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5714285714 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123455048067 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465565007407 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427843998916 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717511768113 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288835445487 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.