Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The trends in the recent year, many the universities change teaching methods. They provide students that online courses instead of classes at school. I personally believe that have two sides benefits and disadvantages.
On the hand, when students study at home, they have a safe than going outside. They don't have contact with toxic. For example bad friends, stimulants, temptation,... If they learned to stay home, they would have yourselves comfortable the space, they could be the break when they feel tired, could eat when they're hungry. In addition, don't go outside, the students will save money, they mustn't pay for the traffic, transportation campus-based housing and other living expenses. The students who don't go by bus, go by motorcycle stay at home. And the students only pay for online courses that will save them some other money. As I have said teaching online courses is advantageous.
However, all anything has a negative side. If the students only sat in the house and learned with the computer, smartphone, iPad,..., they wouldn't have contact between teacher and student at that moment. Students aren't likely to develop social competence as effectively as they can in the physical classroom setting. In the future, they would become the robots, they're passive. Don't develop yourselves, don't have skills in life. As a result of teaching online courses for a long time, the students would be seriously short of skills in communication.
On the whole, online courses have two sides afraid: advantages and disadvantages. In conclusion, I think this method has more disadvantages than benefits for students and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22433460076 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79483458337 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543726235741 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7362915617 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3157894737 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8421052632 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112699047672 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433592202678 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457329895548 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894289168088 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286421724761 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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