Sometimes people are rejecting a job opportunity due to their age or other circumstances. Is it a negative or a positive approach? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Every people need a job to not only make a living but also discipline ourselves. However, our careers are only one of tools for a happy life. sometimes we have reasonable decision to choose other thing instead of a high salary position. Followings are my main arguments.
First, we find out a chance to devote all our lives to a greater thing than personal favorites. For example, my sister was a senior management in an international cooperation, but suddenly she quitted her job last year to become a volunteer manager in an environmental non-government organization with a much lower wage. she explains to me that she can make more contributions to society fighting against air pollution than working 15 hours per day without a clear purpose for her life. In history, Buddha, who should have become a powerful king, leaved his parade to find a way to save human kinds from sufferings.
second, we refuse an invitation to a lucrative position to spend time on preparing for our future careers more soundly. In the case of my best friend, he rejected a chance to become a chief architect in his second year at university. he wanted to take advantage of freedom in that precious period for studying more on other subjects such as history, literature and even politics to expand his knowledge and find out his truly desire.
In short, sometimes people have persuasive reasons to refuse top companies with immense salary immediately. some ideal people find out more crucial destiny for their life than earning money. some ambitious people want to study more to gain even greater success in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
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Suggestion: Sometimes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93014705882 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7616706391 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3579533876 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869734081019 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313685501959 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297349348889 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594625844713 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333569105313 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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