in spite of advanced made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem
These days, people have made great progress in the realm of agriculture. However, many people still have difficulty getting enough food because of some worldwide problems and we should tackle them for all humans’ well-being.
There are many reasons why some people still suffer from starving in the age of technology. Firstly, many technical problems slow down the spread of new scientific work, as a result, we do not produce enough food. As farmers may come across with may problems that scientists do not expect before like the drought or climate changes, we need to wait for a long time until those advanced methods of culturing which can make crop productive in laboratory successfully are applied in every farm and provide more food for us. Also, social problems like poverty and waste of food are more complex. The richer waste so much food while many poor people could not afford even the cheapest food. It is shock that everyday a kitchen in top restaurant in Shanghai drops food that could support a family for a whole week.
In order to solve the starving problems, governments and citizens could do many things. Governments could donate more money to biologists and encourage them to accelerate their study on crops and livestock. Also, governments could put a heavy tax on luxury restaurants as their kitchens always abandon too much edible but not fresh food for good taste. We citizens could contribute to this campaign of stopping hungry too. For example, we could do many charities to share food with people in need in our city and raise money on the Internet to anyone who goes hungry.
All in all, many factors lead to the starve and we are supposed to tackle it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ople in need in our city every week. All in all, many factors lead to the sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06106870229 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53451208907 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3057142566 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142231685428 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572543587111 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041332810511 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857129240408 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440680091679 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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