Sports encourage competition rather than cooperation. Therefore, sports should not be encouraged at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In the digital age, human plays an importance role in the development of each country. Those who faced with immense pressure from work and study, more and more people begin to realize the importance of physical training program. However, there is a heated debate over whether sports should be encouraged in school. Personally, I cannot see any contradiction between competition and cooperation.
On the one hand, Competition is the driving force of social progress and is a natural instinct in humans. Firstly, competition is healthy because it pushes us to give our best. For example, in a running race, athletes continuously effort to gain good results. If one of them achieve breaking records, this can lead to making others more effort than in next competition. Secondly, competition makes competitors and fans can release energy. Competition brings competitors reasonable energy source to improve their healthy better.
On the other hand, sports not only encourage people to compete but also it require the cooperation between participants to achieve certain goals. Some sports game such as basketball and boat racing require cooperation, and without some athletes and sports stars will not be brilliant. For example, soccer is one of the most popular sport. Soccer implies both fantastic individual skills and good cooperation between the players. Therefore, sports can foster a competitive spirit and strengthen the unity of a class.
In conclusion, competition does not result in hatred between rivalries as expected. On the contrary, it plays a very active role in the building-up friendship and relationship between the people from different religions, cultures and political backgrounds. In my opinion, I totally advocate authority should encourage and introduce sports to students at school because sports have benefits both physically and psychologically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...encourage people to compete but also it require the cooperation between participants to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54355400697 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9911304011 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2717895003 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3888888889 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27546612967 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753175916164 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841899589293 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156616116926 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590240488431 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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