It is common nowadays that a great number of youngsters spend hours meeting online with their friends rather than in person. In my opinion, although this trend offers not only students but also all citizens the convenient tool to communicate with each other regardless of time and space, face-to-face interactions would be more effective in a long-term relationship, especially for teenagers. There are a couple of measures for the encouragement of real-life conversations.
On the one hand, the first solution is to create a number of outdoor activities in schools such as football tournaments that require many students to play together at once. By doing this, teenagers might get used to physical sports due to the improvement of health and strong mind, afterward, they would spend hours playing with each other to develop their skills in a certain sport such as basketball.
At the same time, parents play an important role in encouraging their children to meet their friends by restricting the amount of online activity. As a result, youngsters are forced to spend time with their counterparts in person if there is a need for communication.
Some might argue that children must socialize online instead thanks to the development of technology. However, socializing online hardly express full emotions and non-verbal language with each other because screens are not enabled to transmit it.
In conclusion, although communicating through screen regardless of time and space is increasing these days, it is better for teenagers when it comes to real-life communications. Therefore, the increasing outdoor activities tournaments and the strict rules of parents could reduce a substantial amount of socializing online and encourage teenagers to hang out with their friends in person.
- Some people believe that educational qualifications always bring success while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same as as adults who commit crimes To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Scientists and tourists can travel to remote natural environments such as the South Pole Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 78
- In some schools students must study music and learn to play a musical instrument In other schools studying music may not be required or there may be no music classes at all Do you think all students should have to study music Support your opinion with rea 78
- For some people making a lot of money is an important goal Others think that their free time is more important than wealth Which is more important to you Explain giving specific reasons for your choice 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38928571429 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04523507018 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2409683231 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.181818182 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198219527793 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735576004859 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035382522058 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103721884796 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419857429573 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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