Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professionals. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is not uncommon these days that top athletes are paid huge salaries that are higher than other essential occupations in the society, and they can live in well-built houses and possess fancy cars. Some people question about the fairness of their high salaries while others see the justification of it. This essay will discuss both sides of the views, followed by my opinion.
On the one hand, it is fair that successful sportsmen are well paid. Firstly, they have huge public influence. This is because they are exposed to the mass media more frequently especially in significant sport events, making it easy for them to attract public attention. Therefore, if they were invited to participate in commercial advertising or public activities, there would be considerable effects, whether generating financial benefits for companies or raising public awareness on certain issues such as wildlife protection or cancer prevention. Meanwhile, athletes pay extraordinary efforts in trainings and their career is short, risky under heavy pressure. Unlike ordinary jobs such like teachers or lawyers, sport players are tested each time they perform in sport events and it is the high possibility of getting injured that makes their career short and risky. Even if not injured, a number of athletes may suffer from chronic diseases such as spine ailments. These factors all justify that they deserve such an amount of rewards.
On the other hand, the income gap between top sport players and other significant professions cannot be justified if comparing the contributions they make to the society. For example, teachers play a vital role in providing competent people for the society through education, and without doctors’ hard work there would not be millions of lives being saved. Those and other many important professions are equally essential to the society while are often not paid as much as high-achieved sportsmen.
Personally, I think that successful sports players deserve the amount of salaries they are paid regarding their public influence, their phenomenal commitments and the characteristics of their career, while this does not mean they are more important than other professions such as teachers and doctors. It indicates that our society places more value on sport than its counterparts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36813186813 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79542383134 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585164835165 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4135404345 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.125 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209001653925 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657316154549 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544514849822 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144488572311 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615104061154 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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