Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, A great deal is crack by successful sport players and earning more money compare to other important professions such as doctors, engineers, and officers. I think above statement is completely justified.This essay will be elucidate both sides before jumping into a final conclusion.
First and foremost, in my nation many sport professionals are available, while they are not earned more money from good deals like advertisement, short film, convocation ceremony, and inauguration; however, a great deal is taken by only successful sport professionals such as M.S Dhoni, Virat Kohli, P.V Sindhu, Marry Kom, Bajrang Punia and many others are available as a world level like Linol Messi, Cristiano Ronaldo, Sarena Williams, and Rafel nadal. Additionally, players are not play for whole life, they play for only short term as five or ten years only after that they will be retired so that, they are all earn lots of money from extra work. To exemplify, The Hindu Times an Indian newspaper in July 2019 reported that Virat Kohli charges 1.35 crore for every post sharing on Instagram.
On the other hand, other important professions are also important for any nation because they are helpful for economic wealth. In despite of they should working day on day for people, they will be practiced long time and earn monthly salary due to they will be working as long term at least they complete around 60 years then retired. Hence, other important professional cannot earn great deal from government and any other resources. For example, a recent study conducted by IIM Ahmedabad sport person salary 25 time more compared to other professions.
According to my opinion, the government, other sport club and society are given a good deal to athlete for earn extra money for future expenditure as a reason which are play for only short term for our countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, then, while, at least, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11074918567 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66137134411 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.731845842 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.9 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233397507483 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112435929794 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864399476003 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157029785491 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485057152116 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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