Sugar Punjab sun is too harmful some say it is government responsibility to limit sugar intake while others say it’s individual who are responsible. Discuss both of you and give your opinion
In this present era, many people around the world are suffering from various problems which are related to unhealthy food. Few citizens believe that the government have to take steps to control sugar intake, whereas others are not supporting that statement. This essay will explain both perspectives and also gives my opinion. That described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons which indicate that it is the authorities responsibility. First and foremost, nowadays there are different drinks available in the market, which had high sugar. And, the ban of that drinks is only happening if governments approve. For example, since the Indian government ban sugar drinks. After that people became healthier as compared to before. That was written in one survey of The University of Gujarat.
On the other hand, taking high sugar is very dangerous, therefore individual persons have to take care by own. firstly, if the government stops sugar item at the market, then people make that meal at home. So individual responsibility is more effective rather than governments. Secondly, if individual persons have an understanding of healthy food, then they provide that information to their friends and family. For instance, doctors have a good knowledge of healthy food and they teach to their friends and patients too.
To conclude, although the government controls the use of sugar, individual understanding is more accurate than the government for limiting sugar intake. In my honest opinion, it is own responsibility how much sugar is needed.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authorities'' or 'authority's'?
Suggestion: authorities'; authority's
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Suggestion: than
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76665863453 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 250.0 20.2975951904 1232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1300.0 106.682146367 1219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 250.0 20.7667163134 1204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 118.0 7.06120827912 1671% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267735653916 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267735653916 0.084324248473 318% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16890446592 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750805666541 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 128.1 13.0946893788 978% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -190.73 50.2224549098 -380% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 102.0 11.3001002004 903% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.36 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.64 8.58950901804 229% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.0 10.1190380762 1008% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 102.0 10.7795591182 946% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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