Foreign tourists visit historical locations and museums more than residents. There are many reasons behind this tendency, and by following some steps local people might be motivated to visit such places more often.
There are many reasons why the number of local people who visit historical monuments and museums is fewer than overseas tourists, with the most significant one being a rather expensive entry fee of these places. This dissuades local people to revisit, say, a museum, which once has been visited by them since they think there might be nothing new and interesting to learn and enjoy. However, for foreign tourists who travel to another country which has a different culture and traditions, visiting historical and old places give them a golden opportunity to get acquainted with customs which might be completely different from what they have seen and experienced in their lives. Furthermore, the vast majority of local dwellers have to work long hours, leaving them less time for recreational activities, such as visiting art galleries or any kinds of museums.
There are many viable measures to encourage local people to visit historical places more than before. If such places remained appealing to local residents, a higher number of local people would be motivated to visit them. What local authorities should do is to make such places more attractive to residents, by holding more social gathering, wedding and commemoration in historical places.
Moreover, school children, local students and less-affluent sections of society should be offered with huge discounts regarding the entry fees of museums and art galleries, making them more motivated to revisit.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the monotony of museums and old buildings along with the high entrance fee make them less attractive places to local dwellers. The situation can be ameliorated by reducing entry fee and making such places less monotonous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33441558442 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70066449536 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5379150637 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.916666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449815637499 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194152128533 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832351835677 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265097150198 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121137095609 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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