In recent times, the way of interaction among the folks has changed substantially. The essay will be discussing upon the affects that these changes had on the relationships of people.
To begin with, the advancement of technology has brought in a number of new ways of communication between people living in either far or nearby areas. Earlier people were only dependent on letters for communication or interacting with each other. But now, as technology has developed by times far than it used to be and also with the introduction of new social sites like Facebook, WhatsApp, Instagram, etc. people can easily interact with their loved ones residing at thousands of kilometer away from them.
Secondly, the way of communication among people hams also changed in the aspect that people now can socialize more easily than earlier. People earlier found it a lot more difficult to follow their role models or heroes but now it has got a lot easier as using social media sites they remain in touch with their inspirations. Also with the development of technology the social leaders or politicians can easily spread their word using these new sites. For instance, if a law was made in a nation, then earlier half of the citizens did not even got any idea about it but now the moment any new rule or law is added to a country’s constitution each and every citizen get to know about it, thanks to the new communication technologies.
Overall, in my opinion, it is a completely positive development which has made interaction among the people very easier and simpler as well. It has also made it easier for people to stay up to date about the things happening around them.
- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 73
- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the cours 78
- Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the government of richer nation should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such area. 56
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destination over the same period.Write a report for a 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: People
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Suggestion: than
... heroes but now it has got a lot easier as using social media sites they remain in...
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: get
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82501267631 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7222150408 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238431186429 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101552332162 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564112475554 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15312656486 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438164527329 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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