Task 2: People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teacher are the most successful. Discuss both and give your opinion?
In recent years, profession has becoming in a matter of discussion. Some people think that citizens who earn a lot of money are coming off in jobs while others feel that scientists and teachers are more successful because they contribute prosper in society. In this essay, I will examine the both of sides and an overall opinion should be provided.
There are numerous reasons why some people think that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Firstly, people can purchase anything from earning money. For example, they can show off other people about luxury houses, cars or fashion clothes. Also, when patient had cancer, money can help them to buy a good medicine to cure. For this reason, making a lot of money is more successful. Secondly, their brains are able to become more intelligent about manage their finance. For instance, some people in nowadays usually work in two place such as restaurants and coffee shops. They can arrange time a way which more effective to do. As a result, it leads to manage a good their budget.
There are several reasons why those who dedicate prosper in society such as scientists or teachers are the most successful. First of all, they bring benefits such as technology and ways which calculate math. To illustrate, scientists invented washing machine which help people washing clothes. In addition, teachers researched many ways which assist people to calculate math. It is very useful for daily life and people can use them for their purposes. Furthermore, it helps people consider about developed growth about technology or education. More and more research or subjects changed significantly such as update machine can replace people to work because when a boss use machine, it can bring more productivity or quality than a person working. As a result, inventing proper in society will be developed and enhanced their life.
In conclusion, some people think that individuals who make a lot of money are more successful while other believe that scientists and teachers devote to society are the most successful. In my opinion, I strongly agree
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
In recent years profession has becoming in a matter of ...
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Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... about manage their finance For instance some people in nowadays usually work in ...
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Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...their finance For instance some people in nowadays usually work in two place such as resta...
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Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t it leads to manage a good their budget There are several reasons why those who ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uccessful In my opinion I strongly agree
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92571428571 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50388106909 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 350.0 20.2975951904 1724% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1724.0 106.682146367 1616% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 350.0 20.7667163134 1685% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 177.0 7.06120827912 2507% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339698679307 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.339698679307 0.084324248473 403% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277964124809 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138666872529 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 176.8 13.0946893788 1350% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -283.77 50.2224549098 -565% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 139.8 11.3001002004 1237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.11 8.58950901804 281% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 9.78957915832 531% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 142.0 10.1190380762 1403% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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