Task 2: Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service
As a good health plays an important part in human life, some people argue that medical assistance should not be carried out by private hospitals. While I accept that private institutions have some drawbacks, I believe that this is outweighed by benefits.
On the one hand, there are variety of reasons why private healthcare is disadvantageous. First, the cost of treatment is significant high, which is a huge pressure on impoverished families’ budget. If they can not afford to pay for medical service fees such as prescription charges or high- tech machines in the operating theatre, they will not be receiving an adequate treatment, which may put people in life- threatening conditions. A typical example of this is that when people in an emergency situation such as heart attack or traffic accidents, should they be cure well-timed, unless they can meet serious health risks. Second, the likely hood of medical service runned by profit- making companies having inequality is considerably high. Private health care facilities give priorities to those who have money to pay, unlike public hospital which offers equal treatment regardless of whether patients have the money or not. For example, private hospitals offer an immense number of high quality services for women who are during her pregnancy, the more money she pays, the better service she gets.
On the other hand, I support this view that private health care offers the best service and facilities. Firstly, patients can get shorter waiting time. As there are few patients waiting in the line thus, making it easy to receive treatment within the shortest time. Secondly, some private hospitals offer unrestricted visiting hours. This makes it possible for patients’ family to visit the hospital at their convenient time. Finally, private medical services have more privacy, which is necessary for patients in these days. Choosing a private institution, they can access on-demand health care, choose their own doctor and private hospital room. This is particular the case for Vietnamese hospitals, government controlled health care offers hospital room in which from eight to ten sick beds, which is overcrowded and underfunded, whereas private health care offers one to two sick beds per room. This leads to private hospitals are more likely to reduce a lot of pressure on doctors, nursing staff and patients to recover quickly so that more people can be treated.
In conclusion, I would argue that the upsides of private medical service outweighed the downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27901234568 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74863727303 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550617283951 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9749849502 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.526315789 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171206612523 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579083871264 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573771272792 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132029616771 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491479721918 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.