Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many great inventions have benefitted humans related to their work, communication, and entertainment. But at times, this has also impacted negatively on Humans. I strongly agree that the invention of Television has made people more lethargic as well as unsociable.
Firstly, let us consider its impact on children. Teenage is the period for the children to play, grow, and to make friends. But, more often it has found that they prefer to stay at home and watch cartoons rather than playing out games and gossip around. I, recollect my school days where we use to wait for the vacation and holidays to meet friends and discuss about new games as well as played with sands. Nowadays, parents can't handle the stubbornness and crying of their child, hence they ON television shows to stop them from cry.
In addition, even mature adults are found to be more obsessed with the entertainment set. Certain shows which last long for years creates an impression in the minds of the viewer. An individual at times starts connecting themselves with those fictions characters. As a result, it disturbs their life and leads them to live in their imaginary world which negatively impacts their brain and health. In their leisure time, few people prefer to sit in front of it for long hours and avoid spending their quality time with family, friends, and children.
In conclusion, I would say that though the television keeps us entertained and provide us any information of our surrounding, one should limit its time with it and divert that time in reading a newspaper or go out for shopping or gathering with friends and family to build a strong relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93906810036 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68273763713 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641577060932 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4303614815 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15616229954 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481441263062 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475997659896 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908176236063 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179405477566 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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