There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
It is commonly asked by some people that what is the purpose of having music. In the present, there are many kinds of music that people heard from difference country. In my opinion, music is not only an instrument for playing, listening and relaxing, but also the tool for communication. Both traditional music and International music represents the difference culture and story from many part of the world.
Originally, people entertained their life by using local materials, such as, rock, sand, and wood to invent an easy equipment to make a sound which was called as music. People feel relaxing and enjoying when listening and playing the music together with their friends and family. The music was used as a tool for creating a traditional story of people and country's culture. For example, older people often describe their ancestor's life through the traditional music. So local music is the basic tool to learn the culture of each country.
On the other hands, there was a diversity nation in the world so the music have been an important tool for being a non-verbal communication way. People can easily understand from the sound of music. For example, when some people is sad, they tend to listen a slow music, while enjoyable people prefer to play a dance music. In addition, whether people can speak other language or not, they can understand the meaning of rhythm. People also learn the difference culture and languages from international music. Some kinds of international music, such as, Korean, Japanese and Mexican tell the story about their culture, food and social as well.
In conclusion, I believe that music is needed for everyone. Both traditional music and International music were created with different purpose but are worthy to learn at least the culture story from each country and to learn about the different languages and enjoy the rhythm of the music.
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Suggestion: many parts
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Suggestion:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy equipment'.
Suggestion: easy equipment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02229299363 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61482811249 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487261146497 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1260261136 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7647058824 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405727515489 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175741065056 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944814913964 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315194445345 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737310808047 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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