There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
There are many types of music in this world today. Music is an essential part of our life for its smooth nurturing. Music provides the soul into our routine daily life while doing daily work.
Music creates a healthy balance of our work life and mental peace. Some people like soothing music, some like hiphop, some likes traditional, few like jazz and ballroom music. There are a lot of variety of music in the world. The new generation is all about new hiphop and loud music. They like to do daily chores like driving, traveling, reading, cooking, office work every possible things while listening music. Few people say their concentrating abilities increase while listening music. Even in Medical science it has been proven peaceful music increase the chances of speedy recovery.
In my opinion traditional music of country is equally important compared to international music in today's world. Even in traditional music there are a lot of variations like in my country India there are sitar, tabla, flute etcetera traditional musical instruments. These all represent a specific region of country. It has traditional values. But to say traditional is more important than international music is wrong. Music is always a personal choice. person can always have an access to the music of his likes.
There should not be any compulsion over the type of music. But to explore roots and traditional values through ancient music is a personal choice which can help a future generations to know the ancient music also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e generations to know the ancient music also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14741035857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60549240208 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565737051793 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2176400601 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2105263158 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.529063335689 0.244688304435 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198711076109 0.084324248473 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126497259268 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338353456375 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927564471057 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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