There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that Money is the main reason.
Do you agree or disagree ?
The reasons why a person stays with one company for a long time may be variable. Money is believed to be the main reason; however, I disagree with this because the working environment and effective teamwork are more important.
Initially, working environment plays an essential role in affecting an employee’s motivation to work. The fact is that everyone spends one-third of a day at the workplace, so their expectation is to have a comfortable and encouraging environment to perform the tasks effectively. As a result, if the company has a toxic culture or the managers are bossy who ignore employees’ rights all the time, most of the staff will find a way to quit even though the salary is high. One survey in Canada revealed that in 2017, 25% of workers left their jobs because the bosses asked them to work in an unsafe environment.
Additionally, another crucial factor for an employee’s loyalty with this company is effective teamwork. This is because at the workplace, employees need to communicate and collaborate with each other, which requires high connection among them. Consequently, the better the teamwork is, the more responsible an employee feels about his performance as well as the more engaged he is with this organization. For example, the report of Google showed that most of the employees stay with the company for a long time because they treasure teamwork in which they can learn from others and develop themselves.
In conclusion, I personally believe most of the employees will take the organization’s working environment and effective teamwork instead of salary into consideration to ascertain their loyalty with the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, third, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18888888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04008203268 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5660363578 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185513138889 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789936565832 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821511898073 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133966764572 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108926483817 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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