Music is one of the most interesting and excellent art form exist in the world from a long time period. This art form is very vast and varies from culture to culture. Music is having various significants. Whilst, some people like to listen their traditional music on the other hand some like to go with the latest trends of music going on world wide.
First and the foremost, music is an important aspect of an individual's life. It is scientifically proved that music can help in balancing mood. In addition, concentration can be increased by listening certain type of music. Music is also associated with religion. It is believed that religious hymns in the temple can bring one near the divine power. Moreover, a joy of celebration can be enhanced by music. For instance, in weddings, especially in India, music is an special and important part of the wedding.
In my opinion, people all over the globe have their own taste of music. some like traditional music where as some are inclined towards international music. Nowadays some fusion music can be heard in which traditional and international musics are blended beautifully. Beside this, international music is not overpowering the traditional music it can be heard on traditional ceremonies.
From the above discussion it can be concluded that music is very significant and any type of music is important whether it is local or international. It also depends on personal choice that what type of music one wants to listen.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238434163701 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.14590747331 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11743772242 0.0946595960268 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0355871886121 0.0501214627716 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320284697509 0.0437548338989 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149466192171 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0498220640569 0.0403226058552 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98357168056 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0142348754448 0.0326793684256 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0889679715302 0.0861772015684 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0249110320285 0.021408717616 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106761565836 0.011925033212 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1508.0 1933.35771543 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 316.048096192 79% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00796812749 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306772908367 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223107569721 0.28420135186 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179282868526 0.203846283523 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147410358566 0.137316102897 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98357168056 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.037074148 77% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537848605578 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.9425600241 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.9444444444 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7298658254 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 127.492653851 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9444444444 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 36.2552014166 49.1944974215 74% => OK
Elegance: 2.05 1.69124875643 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.582300614448 0.332605444948 175% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110489291259 0.102741220458 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105411026334 0.0668466124924 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532766134773 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13426152262 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224057248179 0.134430193775 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951602378914 0.0742795772207 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31581812848 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0263803527819 0.0638462369009 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.416791351782 0.228012699653 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295848116929 0.058150111329 51% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9