There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided as to motivations that make people commit to an entity. Among a plethora of factors, money is considered the most significant one. Personally, I partly agree with this position.
There are numerous reasons why monetary matters are taken into consideration when it comes to occupational contentment, one of which is its functional role in people's daily life. More specifically, money is a major contributor to people's well-being as it not only ensures their access to basic amenities but also grants them empowers to lead more fulfilling lives. For instance, with a desired income, people could pay for high-quality food items or medical services to have a decent health. Should people stay healthy, they can function more properly, thereby giving their lives a sense of enjoyment. Another justification is that monetary benefits embody the corporation's recognition and appreciation with regard to a job holder's contributions. Knowing that their assiduity and dedication are valued, workers will be less likely to think of job-hopping.
The tenure of an employee is also determined by non-monetary factors such as working environment. For some people, a workstation where they could feel free to communicate with their colleagues or managers is a prerequisite as such environment would enable them to exhange their ideas and learn from each other. An inspiring environment would irrefutably empower them to broaden their perspectives and develop their creavity. In the long run, these attributes could turn them into well-rounded individuals, rendering them satisfied.
In sum, for the reasons mentioned above, it is my contention that beside earnings, workers also place emphasis on different factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 662, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, for instance, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5358490566 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09852455155 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1812131096 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110154205753 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037981855044 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332457420968 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681286485186 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046431479872 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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