There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.
Nowadays, more and more married couples decide not to have babies. This is because they want to have more freedom about financial issues, and time. However, childless couples will suffer loneliness in their old-age and the governments will definitely face a trigger problem, related to population.
On the one side, having no child will carry less pressure on finance and time management. If married couples have children, they have to spend money and one third of their lives to raise offspring, and it can cause tiredness sometimes. However, childless people won’t have to take this responsibility because they can make the most of their lives and just need to work to feed themselves. For instance, some recently studies showed that non-children having couples, who were at the middle age, spent more time for each other. They also had a more extended circle of friends and enjoyed life with less stress than couples raise children.
But non-children having also raises several problematic issues affect not only couples’ old-aged lives but also the nations’ population and overall development. Loneliness in the old ages can make bad effect on elderly’s metal health, especially when their beloved family and partner pass away. Differ from normal couples have children, they don’t have anyone to take care of them and stay by their sides till the last breath. Besides, another problem appears when old generations retired. The more people maintain this trend, the less working men will present in working class, causing undeniably a drop in countries’ GDP for decades. To illustrate, in many developed countries like in Japan and Europe, most couples comfort to live without babies and despite warnings from governments about countries’ population and financial issues.
In conclusion, although not having child trend might increase in the nearby future because of its benefits, we must recognize and consider about it effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, third, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3538961039 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62090624008 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1276219499 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248198697336 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845873610175 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063732657453 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148709979675 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433429419127 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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