Today children are spending much more time watching ki compared to the past. Why do you think this happens? In this a positive or negative?
In this 21st century, children make up one-third of the population of the country and they are the future of the nation. Nowadays, the are spending most of the time for watching TV - television, it is the moot point of discussion. In this essay I will discuss the reasons of this issue and the kind of development positive or negative.
To embark with, the technology has been being accelerated by leaps and bounds, due to that, many technical gizmos are introduced : mobile; video games; toys and many more, one of them is television and all generations of humans are used to with that. there are several causes of this problem, there are many features added in present vis-á-vis past. For an example, few decades ago, television was small, not colour screen, not audible and very few channels were available, however, presently, all the characteristics are improved : LED - Light Emitting Diode display and LCD - Liquid Crystal Display; audio quality has improved; more channels and many more, which attract the offsprings.
In addition, television is the gadget which is used by the highest number of individuals because it provides video as well as audio both types of facilities. Television set has humongous number of drawbacks : effects physically; mentally and many other bad impacts. For an instance, one Scientific research has shown that, the radiations of television screen make the poor eye sights; make the blood clots in mind also kids might go astray and disobey. Watching a crime series is inclines the chances of committing crime.
To conclude, owinf to the improvement of television's features and the channels, which fascinates offsprings about it also it has some bad impacts, affect physically as well as mentally and change the behaviour of kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...are the future of the nation. Nowadays, the are spending most of the time for watching ...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d by leaps and bounds, due to that, many technical gizmos are introduced : mobile...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ations of humans are used to with that. there are several causes of this problem, the...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesights'.
Suggestion: eyesights
...ions of television screen make the poor eye sights; make the blood clots in mind also kids...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, third, well, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13494809689 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78066538283 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.661375575 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129058739623 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532875399731 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584865905698 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789887504945 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933193781542 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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