Today, the expensive price of popular consumer products is because of the power of advertising and not real needs of people. Do you agree or disagree?
In the meantime, the great advertisement and impulsive behaviour of consumers bring about the upscale trending products. I, partially, cite the same perspective which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
To begin with, the value of high-brand products greatly assures the top-tier of raw materials' quality. Remarkably, some products (Gucci and Channel) are well known for the strict quality control of all making process. Despite the overpriced cost, those most likely remain durable for years with appropriate maintenance. Furthermore, cutting-edge technological devices would be another factor of costly price. For 3D designers, to operate certain applications, advanced computer, with the latest version, compiled by high processor performance effectively makes works effortless ,even better, creates job satisfaction.
However, releasing the huge cost of trending items is prompted by the greater display promotion requiring a great amount of budget. In order to reach its fame as popular as high-end brands, its marketing strategy should choose strategic position. It is apparent that digital billboards framed in Times Square New York will likely be clustered as exclusive products. In addition, the considerable influence of public figure potentially affects modern society to be compulsive shopper triggering the lavish price. To illustrate, all products which are promoted by Kadarshian’s family is rapidly sold out in a minute, hence, this high consumerism causes the business owner raising the value of their stuffs.
In conclusion, it seems to me that high price of famous products more significantly links to luxury digital advertising and celebrity endorsement. This is provided that the brand could guarantee its great quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81467181467 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03015754914 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6457710989 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877403477242 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282218148385 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321254225961 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569839375986 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180473807078 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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