There recently are more and more large shopping centres and supermarkets opened. By contrast, small local shops become less popular. In my opinion, this development can have various benefits.
At the first, the more shopping centres and supermarkets occur, the more convenience and advantages for health residents possibly get. In the modern life, people are really busy with their work and their household activities so they do not have time to take care themselves, and their house works usually account for a lot of their time such as shopping equipment, tools and food. This is a reason why if there are a variety of shopping malls opened, people do not need to travel a lot of shops to buy all their daily products instead of shopping in one place. As a result, they probably feel more comfortable, and they can have more leisure time to not only pursue their hobbies but also take care their health.
Moreover, managing some big shopping places can be easier than a lot of small shops which are located throughout areas. In fact, governments seem to save more time to carry out inspection, for example the valid of products and the quality of goods, since they just pay more attention for some places. Also, most of shopping malls have good technology systems for managing their products, this is a useful equipment for examination. In comparation, exaggerate small shops can lead to many disadvantages for authorities since they can forget some of them, and consequently, low quality products can get through, then this will harm customers’ health.
In conclusion, I believe the occurrence of more and more shopping centres and supermarkets is a positive development because it not only gives people more convenience and advantages for their health but also help governments feel easier to manage the quality of products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'useful equipment'.
Suggestion: useful equipment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, really, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75468429738 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8238629753 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245946945517 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116524745932 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695442519849 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195141060962 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878806960945 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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