Today, many people spend less and less time in their home. What are the reasons for this? What are effects of this trend on this individuals and society?
It is true that nowadays some people spend most of their time outside home. There are some reasons leading to this situation and this trend can impact on both individuals and society.
To begin with, there are some obvious causes why many people spend little time in their home. Firstly, workers have to spend more time in work places to solve their tasks because job burden is becoming greater in the competitive market. This means that in the past, workers only spent average 8 hours in worker during weekdays, but now it is immensely crucial to come back home at the midnight or work overtime during weekends. Secondly, people lose a great deal of time to commute on a daily basis because currently, road systems are overloaded by the considerable number of commuters. For instance, people usually stick traffic congestion in the peak hours when workers and students go out and come home.
Consequence, this tendency can detrimentally affect on both individuals and society. In terms of individuals, family members will less exchange information and share pleasure or difficulties, which gradually loses the intimacy within family. As a result, children can receive insufficient care as well as lack the supports form their parents to overcome challenges in lives. When it comes to society, workers will have inadequate time to relieve stress and recharge energy. This can reduce their work productivity leading to business operations less effective.
In conclusion, people spend less time in their home because of job pressure and huge moving time, which results in the less connected relationship within families and ill effectiveness of work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21722846442 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69466740957 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.277405389 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362691928521 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123772019356 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843879918309 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236203351831 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658321675712 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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