Many countries use fossil fuels such as coal or oil as the main sources of energy. However, in some countries the use of alternative
sources of energy is encouraged.
Do you think this a positive or negative development?
While fossil fuels are the predominant energy source in many countries, the use of renewable sources is highly recommended in other nations. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend, I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are two major downsides/ consequences drawbacks when using alternative energy sources. Firstly, this investment might cost a huge amount of national budgets. If government pay attention to discovering alternative energy sources, other sectors of life such as education or healthcare system would lack of sufficient subsidization from governmental organizations, which impedes national growth. Secondly, the safety during operating of alternative energy sources is also a main concern. This concern is a fact when people witnessed two explosions of nuclear plants in Russia and Japan. It not only killed thousands of people immediately but also made many people who have caught cancer by the release of radioactive emissions.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits are more significant than such disadvantages. One reason for this view is that alternative energy sources such as solar power or wind power are environmentally friendly because they discharge carbon emissions less than fossil fuels in functioning process. As a result, we may reduce the dependence on fossil fuels such as coal, oil, gas, which are exhausted day by day this help people cut down on emissions to fight climate change as well as prevent global warming. Another reason is that wind, solar, tidal are not only the alternative sources of energy but also the renewable. By using them, people will have boundless energy sources in the future in order to achieve sustainable development.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the government and the public should use alternative energy sources because their advantages are more significant than their disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99173676798 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4077164923 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355428517051 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117372421291 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801829847995 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219407300901 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515619976628 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.