Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In modern times, tourism is developing at remarkable rates with millions of people setting foot to regions around the world every year. This essay aims to elaborate on the reasons behind such a trend and its benefits.
To begin with, the rise in amount of travelling can be explained by several factors. Firstly, as people become more wealthy, they have more money to afford journeys to far-off destinations for relaxation. Take Vietnamese tourism as an example, for the last 10 years, along with the economic development, an ever-increasing proportion of Vietnamese population have been actively clearing schedules while seeking places in Western countries to escape the monotony of their daily routine and enjoy the spectacular scenery. Secondly, in recent years, studying overseas has also become a sensation with annual scholarships provided by well-known universities attracting hopeful students from all around the globe. For this reason, members of society have been embarking on airplanes and ships to get to the cities where their academic career is nurture.
Travellers obviously have benefited tremendously from the experience they have while exploring new destinations. Firstly, travelling is good for people’s health. For instance, for those who have been buried in immeasurable amount of paper work, a trip to a beach can help to reduce their stress levels and raise their life satisfaction. Secondly, travellers can also enrich their own knowledge. For example, meeting new faces and being exposed to new environments facilitates tourists when they acquire information about new cultures and their distinct local customs.
In conclusion, the rising popularity of travelling among populations is catalyzed by people’s personal desires and financial capabilities and its advantages are hard to overlook.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65942028986 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01550289653 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648550724638 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3274256787 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199053085712 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776247211237 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489275763511 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107377242954 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04033423366 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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