Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development?
The more human beings engage with the modern life, the more their lifestyles change rapidly. The fact that people are having a baby at their thirties is undeniable. While some assert that this is a positive trend, I am of the opinion that this comes with some drawbacks for a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the age difference between parents and children brings problems and conflicts. Simply put, being thirty years or more older than the children, parents cannot understand feeling of their kids. Take a teenager as an example who used to listen to trans music; if he wanted to listen to music loudly, their parent would likely to argue with him as they may not tolerate the noise. These kinds of arguments, eventually, would take its toll on the relationship of parents and their children.
Yet another rational justification is that as individuals involve with the day to day life, their energy ad concertation for their families would decrease. That is, when ones are young not only they have more energy but also they have more free time to allocate to their families. In contrast, when getting older, individuals engage with their jobs and spend a time for their children would be much more difficult. Therefore, having a less time for your children could have a far-reaching negative impact on the children psychologically.
To sum up, based on the reasons mentioned above, having a birth at older ages would have serious repercussions on people’s lives. If these problems were not to addressed at the right time, it might caused perennial problems such as insomnia, and depression both for parents and their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
...icts. Simply put, being thirty years or more older than the children, parents cannot under...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, while, in contrast, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98550724638 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66721796444 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9861901153 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169327809111 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644884248021 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416302857181 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101111418463 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033355860584 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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