It is true that people today have more freedom to choose where to live and work. While this may cause potential problems in their lives, I tend to feel the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
The advancement in communication and transportation results in people becoming heavily dependent on technology, that any network failure may lead life to come to a standstill. For example, people cannot get in touch with others if their phones run out of charge. Another case is that people will get lost easily in a strange city without the guidance of an e-map. Although those situations may cause convenience, I have to admit they are unlikely to happen if you keep in mind charging the device.
Apart from the aforementioned drawbacks are massive advantages the development brings to our daily life. Firstly, commuting time can be significantly reduced due to public transport improvement. Then it is less time-consuming for employees to travel to physical offices. Furthermore, telecommunication even allows people to work from home, thus they can find a relaxing environment that is conducive to work so that they can maintain concentration for a longer period of time and work more productively. Secondly, they can improve the living standard by selecting to live in outskirt where the house is cheaper and the environment is tranquil instead of the city center if they do not have to consider the traffic.
In conclusion, I believe that despite having some minor negatives, the advantages of this situation are stronger for the reasons mentioned above.
- Television has changed the quality of life for an ordinary person. Do you agree or disagree ??? 11
- One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees The developed nations in the world should tackle this problem by taking in more refugees To what extent do you agree with this opinion 91
- In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation? 89
- Today, people in many countries choose to work and live wherever they like thanks to communication and transportation technologies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...can maintain concentration for a longer period of time and work more productively. Secondly, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18972332016 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08821390131 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0358205022 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235037664908 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725586706718 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634219054363 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124458940413 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663372998222 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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