In today's world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, a substantial amount of scientific research is funded and conducted by private corporations instead of the government. Despite the drawback of this trend, I would argue that its benefits are more considerable.
On the one hand, one major disadvantage when a growing number of private companies are involved in scientific research projects is that the innovations or inventions might be commercialized. The main goal of these companies is to invest in profitable fields and earn profits. Thus, once scientists have come up with new medicines or drugs, these products might be sold at a higher price compared to those produced and sold by governmental bodies. This, in turn, makes these products inaccessible to a certain proportion of citizens, especially the impoverished, which gradually exacerbates the gap between the rich and the poor in society.
Regardless of the demerit mentioned above, I suppose that it is negligible in comparison with some anticipated merits of this development. First, owing to huge funding from companies in the private sector, scientific projects can be carried out effectively, and remarkable results can be expected in a shorter period. Besides, the scientists engaging in these projects can benefit from this greatly thanks to higher remuneration packages and other benefits. Second, in some nations, such as Vietnam, whose transparency in terms of funding for science and how the amount is allocated remains a major concern, a majority of citizens find it hard for the research to receive sufficient subsidies from the state, thus unable to produce desirable results.
In conclusion, albeit the potential of commercialization in science, it seems to me that the upsides of the participation of private organizations in scientific research make this an advantageous and positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, so, thus, i suppose, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48070175439 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21846396762 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9063316206 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145806307888 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539168830098 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586328750003 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095540832339 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192828958369 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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