Today, TV channels provide men’s sport shows more than women’s sport shows, why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?
It is true that men’s sport shows are given more time on TV channels than that of women as the fixed mindset of people about men and women. I concur with the idea that TV entertainment channels should give the same amount of time for women’s sport and men’s sport. This essay will first explain why such phenomenon is happening and submit reasons why women’s sport should be given more time.
I believe the foremost reason why TV channels are showing men’s sports more than women is the inequality between men and women caused by a fixed mindset which has instilled in most people. Generation to generation, we are taught that men are stronger, faster and braver than women so therefore men are likely to be suitable for sports. Eventually through thousands of years, many sports, sport shows and sport competitions for men have been created. As a result TV channels give more durations to sports of men.
Despite the argument above, I still support the notion that women’s sport should be shown as much time as men’s sport because of some reasons. Firstly, TV show providers benefit from this because they can make their contents more appealing to TV audiences by showing women’s sports. This means that more people will watch their shows and thus, generate more revenue from it. In addition, shows about women’s sports can attract and influence more women to engage in sports. Therefore, it will do wonders for their health and they can prove that women are as strong as men.
In conclusion, despite the fixed mindset that most people are having which leads to men’s sports are given more time, I still concur with the idea that women’s sports should be given as much time because it benefits both the TV show providers and women.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of women as the fixed mindset of people about men and women. I concur with the i...
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Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is the inequality between men and women caused by a fixed mindset which has inst...
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Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: SO_THEREFORE[1]
Message: Use simply 'so' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: so; therefore
... stronger, faster and braver than women so therefore men are likely to be suitable for sport...
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Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...competitions for men have been created. As a result TV channels give more duration...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84717607973 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31010512508 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458471760797 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2236276234 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.700145221868 0.244688304435 286% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.321023092119 0.084324248473 381% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152894522342 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.514433399175 0.151304729494 340% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116158497346 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of women as the fixed mindset of people about men and women. I concur with the i...
^^
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is the inequality between men and women caused by a fixed mindset which has inst...
^^
Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: SO_THEREFORE[1]
Message: Use simply 'so' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: so; therefore
... stronger, faster and braver than women so therefore men are likely to be suitable for sport...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...competitions for men have been created. As a result TV channels give more duration...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84717607973 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31010512508 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458471760797 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2236276234 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.700145221868 0.244688304435 286% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.321023092119 0.084324248473 381% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152894522342 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.514433399175 0.151304729494 340% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116158497346 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.