Tourist 1
Discussed on a regular basis is the topic of tourism, which is a growing phenomenon all across the globe. Despite its major impacts on economic growth, it brings about numerous problems, among which environmental and social challenges stand out. I entirely agree with the fact that tourists should try hard in preserving and maintaining the environment, together with paying descent respect to social norms of a host country.
It is quite clear that countries with dramatic natural sceneries and overwhelming number of cultural sights grab the attention of hordes of tourists. As you will have noticed, these places of interests are considered as great assets for host country’s environment and culture. Therefore, flocking to these must-see places are accompanied by dire consequences, namely, environmental damages. Take, for example, smashing down delicate flowers, scaring away animals from their feeding and nesting sites as well as air and water pollution are among some of the dark sides of tourism industry. To help this cause, tourists should make any efforts to keep these vitally significant places neat and tidy and avoid dropping litter into natural environment.
Apart from environmental concerns, social responsibilities are claimed to be a necessity when it comes to making a trip to a foreign country. Any individual country has its patterns of behavior, religion and rituals. Henceforth, if the tourists want to lead a life like the natives, it is quite advisable to respect to all the norms and values. Otherwise, they may experience social disputes which absolutely spoil their vacation. This issue carries great significance in Muslim countries where people are obliged to series of Islamic rules. With having this in mind, tourists will be able to socialize well with local residents and cope with the cultural differences more easily.
To conclude, tourism is not just the matter of travelling. Tourists do not only have to take some environmental responsibilities, but also social ones. Hopefully this approach will result in a pleasant holiday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...social challenges stand out. I entirely agree with the fact that tourists should try hard in preserving ...
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Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ll as air and water pollution are among some of the dark sides of tourism industry. To help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95619457927 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633846153846 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5332283696 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.235294118 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169472814943 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514694807719 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813539782281 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114562845839 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341014473225 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.